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经济证明与担保证书

学校只会在学生证明其付款能力后才颁发入学通知书。如果担保人不是申请人本人,担保人在证明自己财力的同时需要提供一封用英文写的担保证书。其中内容应该包括担保人和申请人的关系,担保人的财力(银行证明),和担保人的签名。如果担保人是公司或国家奖学金,申请人必须提供英文版的有关证明。

■经济担保证书(英文范例) 

April 30, 2003

ABC Language School
15 West 44th Street
New York, New York 10036 USA

To whom it may concern:

I certify that I will be responsible for all expenses while my daughter Ling Chen is studying in the United States. I will cover all expenses including Yuko’s education, personal, medical and tuition expenses. I will also be responsible for Ling''s travel expenses when she returns home from the United States after she completes your English program.

Yours Sincerely,
(Signature)

Feng Chen

(翻译)
至有关人士:
兹证明我,陈风,会担保我女儿,陈苓,在美国ABC Language School留学期间的所有费用。包括学费、个人花费、医疗保险费用、书本费用,和陈苓学成后从美国返回台湾的机票花费等等。
敬上
陈风

志愿书

有一些语言学校会要求学生在申请过程中递交一份志愿书。内容不外乎是关于申请人到海外学习语言的原因和将来学成后的计划。志愿书通常包括三个部分:申请人现在学习或工作的情况,到该校学习的原因和学习计划,还有课程完毕后的打算。 有的学校喜欢给学生定题作文,从另外一个角度了解学生。比方说,有的学校会定题:“你最难忘的一次海外经验”等。大体上,志愿书的长度应该在1-2页之内。

■志愿书(英文范例) 

April 30, 2003

ABC Language School
15 West 44th Street
New York, New York 10036 USA

Personal Statement by Jie Lee

My name is Jie Lee. I am writing this letter to explain my purpose in applying to the ABC Language School. My ultimate career objective is to work as an international specialist at a governmental organization. To achieve this goal, I plan to attend a college in the United States to earn a B.A. degree in Political Science.

I earned my high school degree from Nan-Hua High School in Taipei, Taiwan last year. I was a member of the International Exchange & Culture Club so I could explore my interest in other countries’ cultures.

Nan-Hua High School provides its students with a variety of international education opportunities including intensive English courses, exchange programs with our sister school in Ohio, and English classes instructed by native speakers. I had many opportunities to develop my English skills and explore my interest in foreign cultures by actively participating in classes and activities organized through my school.

I want to improve my English skills in order to be admitted to a college in the United States and experience American culture first-hand.

I am applying to your language school today for several reasons. First, your extension program will provide me with the opportunity to apply and be admitted to an American college or university. Second, your program has a very good reputation for its academic English classes. I would like to attend your TOEFL class to improve my TOEFL score. Lastly, your classes are small enough to encourage group discussion and provide students with more one-on-one interaction with the English instructor. I strongly believe the ABC English Language Program is the ideal place for me to achieve my academic goals.


Yours Sincerely,
(Signature)

Jie Lee

(翻译)
我的名字叫李杰,是台北市南华初中某某届的毕业生。从小在父亲的影响下对国际政治有非常浓厚的兴趣,我打算在不久的将来到美国的大学念政治学并拿取学士学位。 鉴于现在的英语能力有限,为了能充分地应付将来的大学课程,我打算先到ABC Language School把英文程度提高。

南华初中在美国俄亥俄州有一家姐妹学校,彼此有交换生的课程。因此南华的学生都有机会选择由美国老师执教的密集英语课程。在我上密集英语课程和参与学校举办的各种国际活动中,我争取了很多练习英文的机会。至于课外活动,我最有兴趣参与的一项是国际文化交留会。因为这些活动可以让身在台湾的我有机会了解别的国家和社会的文化。

贵校所提供的英文延续课程是我决定申请的最大原因,因为这类课程为我将来顺利就读普通大学课程铺垫了一条路。而且贵校在英文教学和TOFEL预备方面享负盛名,又实行小班教育,我深信我能在短期内提高我的英语能力和TOFEL 成绩。以及,我觉得念ABC Language School的课程,不但可以帮助我实现将来就读美国大学的理想,并且可以提前让我对美国文化有更进一步的了解。

敬上
李杰


推荐信

推荐信是学校通过别人对你的评价去了解你为人的一种途径。 其目的无非是想看看你是一个怎样的学生或工作人员。所以,当你寻找写推荐信的人时,务必找一个对你有一定认识的初中导师、大学教授、和以往或现任的上司。推荐信的长度大概在1-2页左右。内容应该包括写信人和你的关系、对你在学校或工作上的评价、个人特长或性格的描述,还有就读该语言学校的计划等等。

■推荐信(英文范例) 

April 30, 2003

ABC Language School
15 West 44th Street
New York, New York 10036 USA

Dear Sir/ Madam,

It is with great pleasure that I recommend Ms. Li-heng Huang to attend your English program. For three years, Ms. Huang was a student in my English grammar and conversational class.

Ms. Huang was an outstanding student. Her interest in learning the English language allowed her to develop her English skills and earn high scores on the exams. She was always enthusiastic about discussing various subjects pertaining to foreign cultures and voicing her opinions about current events.

Ms. Huang was an active member of the International Exchange & Culture Club. She took on leadership roles by organizing events and challenged her fellow students by raising interesting questions and making intelligent comments. Ms. Huang was an impressive student, always active in events and curious about her projects.

She hopes to develop and improve her English skills at your school in order to prepare herself to attend college in the United States. I am confident she is qualified to attend your program and will succeed in her English studies. It is without reservation that I wholeheartedly recommend Ms. Li-heng Huang to attend your reputable program.

Yours Sincerely,
(Signature)

Hui-zhen Hsu
Chief Instructor
English Department
Nan-Hua High School


(翻译)
敬爱的先生或女士:
很荣幸今天我能在此向你推荐一位十分优秀的学生,黄力行。在我的英文口语和语法班上,力行一直以优秀的成绩名列前茅。三年里, 他对学习英文的态度一丝不苟,在班上大胆发表独特的见解,其认真的态度也带动了其它学生的积极性。

在课外,力行还活跃于各种学生团体。其中,他在国际文化交流会里发挥着领导者的才能带领其它同学组织活动,举行讨论。

力行一直希望将来能有机会就读美国的大学专攻政治学。所以藉此机会到贵校学习英文为将来就读正规大学课程奠定基础。我深深相信力行会以认真诚恳的态度对待学业,并能在贵校发挥其一贯的优秀作风,做一名品学兼优的学生。希望贵校不要错过这样一位难得的人才。

敬上
南华初中 英语科
徐惠珍


在递交所有文件后,没有听到学校通知,如何询问申请表格的状况

在递交所有文件后,没有听到学校通知,如何询问申请表格的状况 当你递交了申请表、学校要求的所有文件、以及学校要求的定金后,学校会给你颁发入学通知书。如果你完成了以上的所有步骤,却迟迟没有收到学校的通知,我们建议你马上用email联络校方有关人士,看看你寄出的文件是否安全到达。 千万不要因为邮寄上的失误或是校方的大意而耽误了你的行程。

■询问申请表格状态 (英文范例)

主题 Inquiring the Status of my Application
Dear Sir or Madam:

I am writing to confirm I sent the required documentation to complete the application process by Air Mail on March 3, 2003.

Nearly two weeks have passed since I sent the documents and I have not yet received your response. I would very much appreciate it if you could inform me of the current condition of my application.

I am looking forward to your reply.

Best regards,

Wen-jing Chen


(翻译)
敬爱的先生或女士:
我在03/03/2003 以航空信的方式向贵校递交了所有要求的文件和定金。可是两个星期过去了,却迟迟没有收到贵校进一步的通知。不知道我递交的文件是否安全到达贵校。请校方尽快与我联络, 谢谢。

敬上
陈文静

在递交所有要求文件后, 要求取消申请

当你递交了所有文件和定金后,因为个人紧急情况要取消申请时,务必尽快与校方联络。Email和信件是很正式的方式,但是如果情况紧急的话,你也可以用电话联系。无论是采用以上的任何一种方式,申请人一定要在联系时向校方提供以下的资料以便学校查询。资料包括:申请人姓名、申请课程的名称、课程开学时间,和申请人取消的理由。通常,申请费用一概不退还。至于定金,不同的学校有不同的规定,申请人在取消课程的同时要向校方询问清楚有关定金退还的规定。

■取消申请(英文范例)

主题Cancellation of my Application
Dear Sir or Madam:

I am writing to cancel my application.

On June 10, I applied to your 8-week Intensive English Course beginning on September 1, 2004 through ApplyESL.com’s online application service.

I sent all the required application materials including the payment of your program’s tuition deposit. Regretfully, however, I will not be able to attend your school’s program due to personal circumstances.

Please take all the necessary steps to officially cancel my application by following your program’s cancellation and refund policies.

Thank you very much for your attention to this matter.

Sincerely,


Hsiao-min Fan


(翻译)
敬爱的先生或女士:
很抱歉我在这里,因为个人原因,要提出取消本人在06/10经由ApplyESL.com向贵校申请的课程。以下是我所申请的课程资料:密集英语课程,开学时间为09/01/2004。

我已经按照贵校的要求递交了所有文件和定金。 请校方按照您的规定帮我正式取消我的申请。 非常感谢您为此事费心。

敬上
沈小敏

当I-20有误时,要求学校更改错误并重新核发

留学美国的同学在递交所有文件并交付定金以后会收到学校颁发的入学通知书和办理签证时必须一并出示的I-20。I-20是一份非常重要的文件。同学在收到I-20后一定要仔细校对上面的资料看是否正确。一旦发现有误,要马上与校方联系,以便学校尽快颁发正确的I-20。

■重新颁发I-20 (英文范例)

主题 Request to Re-Issue my Form I-20

Dear Sir or Madam:

I am writing to request that you re-issue my Form I-20.

On June 10, I applied to your 8-week Intensive English Course beginning on September 1, 2004 through ApplyESL.com’s online application service.

I received a Form I-20 from your school yesterday, but I found my first name was misspelled on the form.

Wrong : Jing Lee
Correct : Qing Lee

Please correct my name, issue a new Form I-20 and send it by express mail to the following mailing address as soon as possible:

Attn:Qing Lee
No. 140 Sec. 1, ChienKuo N. Road
Taipei, Taiwan

Thank you very much for your attention to this matter.

Best regards,

Qing Lee


(翻译)
敬爱的先生或女士:

我叫李清,在06/10经由ApplyESL.com向贵校申请了为期8个星期的密集英语课程,开学时间是09/01/2004。

在递交了所有文件后,终于在昨天收到贵校核发的I-20。谢谢。可是,在细心校对后,我发现I-20上,校方把我的名字拼写错了。错误如下:

错:Jing Lee
对:Qing Lee

请校方在改正以上错误后重新颁发I-20,并且用国际快递寄到以下地址:

Attn:Qing Lee
No. 140 Sec. 1, ChienKuo N. Road
Taipei, Taiwan

非常感谢您为此事费心。

敬上
李清


如何向学校索取资料

当你在学校的网站上找不到你所需要的资料时,你可以直接联系学校并索取有关资料。

■索取数据 (英文范例)

主题Request for Information
Dear Sir or Madam:

My name is Yue-hua Chang and I am currently a student at Nan-hau High School in Japan. I am planning to study English at your school next summer and would like to receive your school’s housing information. I would appreciate if you could send your information to the following mailing address:

My mailing address is as follows.

Attn:Yue-hua Chang
No. 140 Sec. 1, ChienKuo N. Road
Taipei, Taiwan

Thank you very much for your assistance and I look forward to hearing from you.

Sincerely,

Yue-hua Chang


(翻译)
敬爱的先生或女士:

我的名字叫张跃华,是南华初中三年级的学生。我打算在这个暑假到贵校进修英文。由于在网上找不到关于住宿的资料, 所以通过这封信向学校索取有关资料。麻烦校方把住宿信息寄到以下的地址:

Attn:Yue-hua Chang
No. 140 Sec. 1, ChienKuo N. Road
Taipei, Taiwan

谢谢。希望能尽快收到你的回复。

敬上,
张跃华